Wednesday, August 15, 2012

FanFic - FINAL

Blamed for being blank.


SMASH!!
“Who did it?” Annie's voice roared down the hall.
“Ruthie,” said Simon, “She had her basketball inside again”
“RUTHIE CAMDEN, you get down here young lady”
Confused and half awake “Yes mum?”
“How could you honey? I specifically told you all, no ball games in the house”
“Huh? But mum, I just...”
“You just got yourself grounded for a week now go to your room”
“Where I was all morning,” replied Ruthie.
“Did I say a week, make that two,” Annie angrily growled.

Ruthie marched back upstairs to her bedroom still confused as to how she ended up getting grounded for being woken up by her mum, but as she walked passed she noticed a stone and Simon with his slingshot and straight away knew that she got blamed for something she never did.

“You're grounded for a week, make that two, for playing inside, I didn't even do anything Argh!” mimicked Ruthie loud enough for Eric to hear.

“What’s wrong honey?”
“JUST GO AWAY DAD”
“You sure you don't want to talk about it?”
“Dad (sighs) just GO AWAY!!”

“Morning”
“Good Morning Annie. Ruthie? What happened?” asked Eric,
“Oh just the usual Ruthie, playing with her basketball inside, and broke my grandmothers vase. Argh! this girl sometimes worries me Eric.”
Eric then embraces Annie “Honey, remember, that vase is just a material thing. Our daughter however was made from love.”

Annie then released a long sigh and just hugged Eric.

After talking over the event that occurred in the morning, Eric stood up and took their cups to the sink and noticed something outside, “Um Annie, you might want to see this” Annie stood up and walked towards Eric, “You said Ruthie had her basketball inside, her ball is outside next to the hoop”

Right then, Annie was confused and tried to fit in the pieces to her confused puzzle, like the pieces to the shattered vase. “If Ruthie didn't have her ball inside then it means … SIMON.”

Annie more furious than when she grounded Ruthie, searched the whole house for Simon but it was too late, he had already left for his holiday programmes.

While Annie was working on dinner, Ruthie had sneaked into Simons room and retrieved a few of his things to play a prank on him and messed it up to make it look as if someone has broken into his room.

BANG!!

“Who was that?” yelled Eric,
“Simon Dad,” replied Ruthie.
“Ruthie. Simon isn’t home. Come downstairs now.”
“MAN! I always get in trouble. It’s not fair, and they always go easy on Simon, ARGH! My parent’s SUCK.”

Right there and then Eric and Annie understood that Ruthie was playing revenge on Simon.
As soon as Ruthie was down, she started to pull a sook and hugged Eric. Annie joined in as well but Ruthie pushed her away. Annie begun to realise that what she had done has really affected her daughter and thought carefully whether this vase or her daughter was more important.
“Ruthie I am so sorry. It's just that I've been under so much stress and that vase incident just cracked the ice berg in half. I am so sorry, but throwing mud back onto your brother isn't going to help the situation. If anything it’s just going to make it worst. When he returns I will talk to him okay honey?” they all embraced again and were happy.

Simon and his friends returned to the Camden home, and as he walked in Ruthie walked upstairs from having a snack and just gave him grinned look.

“SIMON CAMDEN, IN HERE, NOW” Annie screamed

 Simon knew something was up and sent his friends home instead.

As Simon walks into the kitchen He throws his bag on the floor

“Woooh I had a hard day on the courts, and man am I hungry. What’s to eat mum?”
“Simon, you want to eat? Here” She places a platter in front of him.
As Simon removes the lid the broken vase was on the platter, “umm what’s going on?”
“Simon I can't believe you. You break this vase, and then blame it on your sister. How could you lie to me. And then blame someone else for your wrong?”
“I'm sor...”
“Save it young man. You will glue this vase back in shape piece by piece back and until then you are grounded and you will not join anymore holiday programmes.”

“Man this sucks,” said Simon as he walks out of the kitchen an kicks his bag.
“OH by the way, someone broke into your room. So while you are fixing up my vase, fix up your room too.”

With a big smile on Annie’s face she returned to her cooking and accepted her husband’s embrace and laughed silently as she heard him whisper “He is just like you, blaming the innocent ones.”

Final version fanfic - The Legends of the "Les Enfants Terribles"

This is a fanfic of the Pirate of the Caribbean, everything in this fanfic is not owned by me.
I wrote the story bases on after the event of PoC: On Stranger Tides. This is the final version of it.

The Legends of the "Les Enfants Terribles"



Chapter 1: Good Old Rival.
    On the port city of Tortuga, prostitutes and all kinds of criminals are dangling on every corner of the streets. Fighting and killing happen in this city as an initial element of life. Hidden in this corrupted city, a one of a kind bar, which is excluded from all sins happening around Tortuga, silently and peacefully did existed. The bar operates as every bar should be in those civilized societies, people drinking and chatting as utmost normal as it could be, which seems incredibly strange in this kind of city. Customer here wear with only 1 kind of color on the clothes, white it is, which would not help but brings curiosities to anyone who is a new face here. Despise all that, in the deepest corner of this mysterious bar, two men are whispering, ridiculously out of space too with their normal clothes.

"Why are we here, Jack? There are many places I'd rather be elsewhere than this stupid kind of place ... errs... What was it called...? Somewhat "Le Fanatics", aye?"  The man with thick beard said.

 "Le Fanatre Soleil,” The bandanna-headed man with a long curly tied hair added.

"Aye, that's the name! What was this idiotic name? And why are we speaking with this whispering manner? We are in a BAR for Pete's sake!"  The bearded-man grumbled.

 "Gibbs, if ye wouldn't shut the trap of ye off, I will do it for ye. Savvy?" -the bandanna-headed man whispered.




   Jack, running his black rimmed eyes around the bar,
 looked cautiously and slowly in every corner of it.

"Does it bother you why is this bar, a weird-manner sickening bar it is, so quietly and unusual in this chaotic Tortuga?" - Jack asked Gibbs while his eyes still remained cautious...

"Aye, no frickin' idea," Gibbs said.

"Do you know who is running this boring pile of rum?" - Jack continues.

"Nope. That is the question I would love to be answered by you, Jack," - Gibbs sighed

"Tell me, Gibbs. Who do you think I, the infamous Captain Jack Sparrow of the Black Pearl....."

"-Former Captain! If we consider the ship has been shrunk into a bottled-ship, you have no ship anymore to be captain"- Gibbs cut in.

"...CAPTAIN of the Black Pearl!" - Jack stressed - "And I will regain the Pearl back in its usual form. That I guarantee to you, Mr. Gibbs! Savvy?"

"Aye ..." - Gibbs, frustrated, nodded his head while staring into spaces.

"Well, back to the question, who do you think I fear the most? My treacherous mate Barbossa or good ol' Davy Jones?" - Jack asked with a minor shivering voice.

"Aye, I would bet it on the old Davy Jones. You did died by his little tentacle-pet," - Gibbs squinted

"Oi, no, me hearty. I would rather don't meet him, not fear him, savvy?" - Jack grinded.

"Blimey! If you ain't even fear Davy Jones, I don't think you would fear anything else," - Gibbs gasped, surprisingly.

"Aye, I take that as a compliment. Well, there is, indeed, someone who I fear of, someone I cannot outsmart, savvy? I ain't fear of people who I can outsmart, able to cheat them, but those I can't, Savvy?" - Jack said with his fingers unintentionally waved.

"Aye" - Gibbs said.

"The mate who runs this place, his name is Luz; he is the leader of "Les Enfants Terribles…" 

"-LES ENFANTS TERRIBLES"??? THE LES ENFANTS TERRIBLES???" - Gibbs cut in with his high toned voice.

"-- he's my oldest mate, as well as my greatest nemesis. I respected him as much as I feared him. Savvy?" - Jack continues with his shivering voice.

"Aye, in that case, then I understands why this bar is like this, eh?" - Gibbs said.

"Aye, there are not only me afraid of that man. The people here as well, in this VERY alike pit hole Tortuga, don't DARE cross him" - Jack continues.

"How do they dare, I wonder, these pirates are the most powerful group in the entire ocean. Even good ol' Davy Jones would have to think twice when facing them head on. They would dare do anything, and I really mean ANYTHING. The only thing weird about them is that they do not kill women,” - Gibbs stated.

"That's not really scary, ain't mate?" - Jack sounded confused.




   Gibbs sighed and put his face on his palm. He said, "Why do I have the feeling that I'm gonna be drag forcefully into messing with these dangerous folks VERY soon? By you, of course! Despite the fact, we are already aware of how FRIENDLY these folks are!" - Gibbs said with utmost awareness - "Your bloody skull is cracked, do you know that Jack?! But that is what I like about you, aye!" - Gibbs added.

"..... You probably might want to change your feeling after this." - Jack said with a guilty glance while anxiously biting his fingernails.

"The boss is expecting you, Mr. Jack Sparrow and Mr. ...?" - Suddenly, the conversation was cut-off by the present of a tall-muscular man dressed in decent white clothes and politely manners.

"CAPTAIN Jack Sparrow, if you don't mind, lad." - Jack awkwardly corrected the man.

".... Cor blimey! You knew about this Jack?! Not again!" - Surprised Gibbs shouted, narrower his eyes while doing so.

Jack folded his palms together while saying "I'm sorry" in his mouth but the words did not break into sound, like he was swallowing his own guilty words.




    The man looked across the room, to the end of it, where lies the barkeep and those skulls which displayed on top of the counter as a decoration. Only Davy Jones could tell if those skulls are real or not.

“Mr. Jack and Mr. Cor Blimey, please, this way." - The man stepped aside and shown them a way into the black wooden door behind the counter of the bar.

 "It's Gibbs ... Argh, whatever, I just hope you know what you are doing Jack!" - Gibbs grumbled angrily.

"In fact, I don't, love," - Jack said while trying to swallow in his blocked throat - "And it's CAPTAIN Jack Sparrow," - Jack turned his back, focused his trimmed eyes into the eyes of the tall man, as if he was threatening him.

Jack and Gibbs followed the big man, passed the door behind the counter, walked through a long, dark and hideous hallway. When they got to the end of the hall, the big man opened the door and invited the two of them in. As they walked in, those fire bundles running along the hallway wall surprisingly light up, flickering rapidly.




    A young man walked out from the shadow of the dark, he has long dark hair, touching his shoulders, and stubble covered his handsome face. He has a deep brown eyes and a long scar, which crossed between his eyes. He wore a white light shirt with long sleeves, long brown leather pant, and a small red cloth wrapped around his wrist. Gibbs looked unusually anxious while Jack, on the other hand, leaned on and whispered to Gibbs ear:

"We should have wear dress," – Jack joked.

"Fancy that, if it isn't the infamous good ol’ Jack Sparrow and his hearty, eh." - The young man said with a deep voice - "Well well, I will give you 3 minutes to explain your true purpose here before I decide to give you and your mate a "Survival Try-out". Oh, and don't even count on your petty lies to save your skin, mate. I think you have already learned that lesson, in a hard way as I recalled." - The young man said with a cold-calming voice - "Starting NOW." - The man stressed deeper.
"I want to join your crews" - Jack quickly said in such an eagerly manner as well.
"WHAT?" - Gibbs could not believe what he has just heard, those he thought only merely words came from Jack own mouth.


END CHAPTER.

Fanfiction Draft

Fanfiction (un-named)

This is my fanfic draft, 
I based it around the movie The Note Book, haven't quite finished the story yet. 

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It’s already been one month since Ally was admitted into hospital.

Ally's memories
of the person she loved most were were slowly starting to fade away

She was trying to
keep it a secret to Noah, but she just could not tolerate the thought of losing the memories her one true love.
I will never forget him, she thought to herself... I loved, love, and will love her only man Noah. She promised to herself that she’ll never forget him for as long as she can and she wrote down his name on her palm in very small print, 'love Noah......'

Noah came 
into the room.
He had just met Ally's doctor. His eyes were red with tears rolling down his eyes but he tried his best to make a smile in front of Ally.

During the consultation with her doctor, Ally couldn’t bear the thought of losing her love but all the negative thoughts vanished into thin air when she saw Noah's face.





Like they had promised, Noah was reading a book for Ally.
Even though he had read the whole book to her 12 times, he always pretended that to her that every reading was his first.
A
s he approached the end of the book slip, Noah thought to himself, 'After I read the next chapter, as always, Ally will end up in tears. '

Ready as always, Noah held a small white handkerchief in his hand for Ally.
When the book finished, Noah held the white handkerchief to wipe Ally’s  tears, and as always Noah was holding Ally's hand.

A quiet knock at the door broke the silence. It was a nurse asking for Noah to go see the doctor.
Noah couldn’t help but feel anxious as to what news the doctor had for him but he reassured Ally that everything was going to be alright before he left for the door.
He stopped in front of the doctor’s room, let out a deep breath and knocked quietly on the door.

"Excuse me."
"Come on in." The doctor replied.

Ally's doctor, Henry offered for Noah to sit down.

"Have a cup of tea and please listen carefully to what I have to say.”

A hundred thoughts started rushing through Noah’s mind at that instant. He tried to keep his hands holding the teacup still but he couldn’t stop the trembling. To his dismay, the grave news soon followed.

"I know this is going to be hard for you but as a doctor I thought it was best to let you know the news as soon as I couldI know that this is going to be hard to accept, so I want you to take it in slowly."
"1 hour ago, I received the final test results of Ally's conditionFrom what I can see here, she may only have three more days left…"

Clang! The teacup shattered across the floor. Henry stopped talking and looked at Noah for a moment. Noah’s eyes were shaking with horror and disbelief.

"Three days?"
"There’s got to be some kind of mistake. How can she only have three days?"

Noah's eyes were becoming redder, and eventually he could not hold the tears in any longer.

"Yes I'm really sorry"

Noah slowly got up from his seat and left the room without saying another word.

Noah walked blankly across the corridor and he reached Ally's room. He looked into a small window on the door. Ally was writing something with a serious face.

He didn't know what to say to her, let alone how to say it or when.
He could only stare at the beautiful face of his lover while a feeling of emptiness swooped over him. He just could not find the right way.
He decided to wipe his tears and he entered the room, putting on his brightest face for Ally.




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The Notebook is one of the most romantic love movies I've ever seen, even though it's predictable as with many other romance stories. The Notebook is set in the 1940s where the class and wealth status of a family is considered to be very important. Allie who is lucky enough to come from a wealthy family and Noah who is not so lucky – fall in love with each other at first glance. Of course, Allie’s parents don't approve of her being with Noah and she is forced to move to the city where she had no way of reaching out to Noah. They each carry on with their lives after that and after 6 years, destiny once again reunites them.
As the movie progresses and Allie becomes older, she is shown to suffer from dementia which has taken away her memories, leaving her to not being able to recognize her own husband. But Noah’s efforts to bring back her memory, even for just one short moment continue every day. It pains his heart to see her loved one like this but he does not give up hope and reads to her from the ‘notebook’ which is full of the stories of the moments they shared together.The writer has done a great job making it a real happy ending in this. In the end, they know that their feelings for each other have not changed and share another happy moment of their life together.






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