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“Why
don't I make you some of this new Mococoa Drink? All natural. Cocoa beans from
the upper slopes of Mount Nicaragua. No artificial sweeteners!”
Truman
looks at Meryl, “What the hell are you talking about?”
Truman
rises from the table and backs Meryl around the room.
“What
the hell has that got to do with anything? Tell me what's happening?”
Meryl
freaks out and for a second she forgets her lines. Luckily, she regains her memory.
“Lets have a baby!”
“What?
Where is this coming from?”
Meryl
thinks back to when she first started the show. She remembers the contract that
she signed with Christoff. She remembers that her family are struggling to get
by each day. She remembers why she moved to Hollywood in the first place. She remembers
the reasons why she signed the contract.
What if Truman agrees to have a baby
with me? What am I gonna do then?
What about MY family? What about MY future?
Truman
is dumbfounded by this unexpected question from Meryl, he was too busy thinking
about the reason why Meryl was acting suspiciously before that he didn’t see
this coming.
Can things get weirder than this now
that Meryl is asking for a baby?
“C’mon
Truman, what’s stopping you?”
She
makes her way over to him. She had been rehearsing and preparing for this scene
for a very long time. And now its finally here.
“My
darling Tru, I know you love me and you know I love you too. I think it is time
for us to really start a family now.”
“But
Meryl I want to travel. See the world. See news things, see new people, new roads,
new neighbours. Heck Meryl I wanna drive over a full bridge. I don’t want to be
stuck here in Seahaven forever.“
“Let’s
leave this place, we’ll find a crew ship or we’ll just show up at the airport
and go where ever we want to go.”
“No
Truman! We already agreed that this will be the place for us, that our children
are going to grow up here.”
Truman
can see in Meryls’ eyes that this is what she really wants. Being the good
actress that Meryl is, she was able to convince Truman to rid of his wild
fascinations and he decides to settle for Seahaven.
That
night, as the world watches on, they made love to one another. That night as
the world watches on, Meryl was stripped
of her freedom stripped of her right to her own future.
Business
was back to normal the next day and this continued on for a while. For about
one month, things were quiet for Seahaven and for the world. Until one day
Truman comes across Laurens’ picture in his basement. He thinks back about what
she had said the last time he saw her.
“I
am not allowed to talk to you.”
Why would she say that?
When
darkness came, Truman escapes to the beach to clear his head. Memories of
Lauren came flooding back and his plans of wanting to go for an adventure start
again. He decides to leave Seahaven; he decides to overcome his fears of the
water. He decides to leave for good.
Meanwhile
back home, Meryl starts to feel unwell and is taken to the hospital by Marlon.
Christoff is unaware of this as all his attention is now focussed on Truman who
is half way across the studio.
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The
boat hits the wall, Truman is gobsmacked. He slowly makes his way to the front
of the mast where it had pierced the perfect blue skied wall that faced him.
Baffled by what he is seeing, Truman is shocked as mixed emotions rush through
his head.
Is this why Meryl was acting weird
earlier on? Is this why Lauren said she couldn’t talk to me?
Truman
walks up the stairs. Just before he opens the door, Christoff speaks from his
Sun room. His voice echoes across the studio.
“Truman...my son... Please don’t
go!”
“Who
are you?”
“I
am your father”, exclaimed the voice.
“My
father? My father was lost at sea... oh wait I have no father at all... So who
are you?”
“I
am the creator of this show, this studio and this world is what I created, all
for you.”
“Truman
there are a million people out there in the world who have looked up to you and
have invited you into their homes every single day of your life. Do you really
want to disappoint them?”
“Me?
Disappoint them? How dare you talk to me about disappointing others?”
With
that last take, Truman turns his back to the hidden cameras and exits the show.
Meanwhile
back in Seahaven Meryl undergoes medical tests and discovered that she was now
one month pregnant. With Truman now gone, she is unsure of what to do with this
baby. Tears start to stream down her face. She felt the disappointment of her
family; the disappointment in herself.
Why did I sign up for this?
Meryl
is devastated. The last thing she wanted was a baby. She left her home and her
family to pursue a career in acting and look at where her acting has led her.
Christoff
enters the room, he has heard of the news and he can sense a court case coming
his way. There it was, right in front of him was the consequene of his actions.
While he contemplates the events which have just occurred; the star of his show
gone and an unwanted pregnancy in his hands, he reveals another masterplan for
the world.
Christoff
draws another contract in his mind. The unborn baby will be Trumans successor, and
will be the star of the next ultimate reality show. This time, nothing will go
wrong, he will make sure of that. And with that in mind, Meryl agrees for what
Christoff has planned and reaches over for her bag. She pulls out a Mococoa
Drink, places it next to her stomach and says “Mococoa Drink. The best drink
for moments like these.”
WOW! This is great, i enjoyed the whole thing. Its kind of like a mystery, having you examine carefully what part the characters actually play. The grammar is superb and the flow of the whole text was easy to read and really understandable. One thing i do complement you on is how used a bit of slang "c'mon" in your text which is well used in this content in the film! .. Hope your Final is as great as your draft.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very well crafted fanfic. You do write really well, and the story was really interesting. The only thing I could advice you is you could add a little more of speaking language to it, it could make the story more realistic! Cheers!
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